Written for Mondays Finish the Story Challenge. This is a flash fiction challenge where we are provided with a new photo each week, and the first sentence of a story.Your challenge is to finish the story using 100-150 words, not including the sentence provided. For other interesting takes on this challenge just click on the blue frog at the end of this post.
Finish the story begins with: “They finally made their escape.”
They finally made their escape.
They had stalked their prey for the last 4 hours. Their targets were doing everything possible to make their mission a success. They were cooking fish for starters. The other food containers were all uncovered. They were cooking in a camouflaged area. All the better to sneak up on them and attack.
They attacked in unison. Two of their targets, the older ones, started to run. Stupid idea. Didn’t they understand that you simple can’t outrun a bear. The other two, who were but small children, stood their ground.
Eating until they were full the bears they decided to have some more fun. Their victims had left their car behind. Both John and Linda, the two older bears decided to go for a little joy ride.
As they left, Wanda and William, their two cubs, waved goodbye.
Those bears have spent too much time around humans. Cute story, Danny. 😀 Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
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🙂 Makes me happy!
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What an interesting take on the prompt. 🙂 I can’t help but smile each time I think about the bears driving off in the car!
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So glad you enjoyed. And welcome to my world; thanks for following.
DJ
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This is definitely a walk on the wild side. Great fun! Teddy Bear’s Picnic and Yogi and Boo Boo all in one. A really entertaining read, Danny. Thank you.
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Many thanks!!!!!
DJ
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If you go down to the woods today your sure of a big surprise… Maybe I shouldn’t have sung that to my sister so many times.
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The bears are out of the woods today ~Great writing Danny~
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Bears’ day out 🙂
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I don’t know why but I had visions of Yogu Bear as I read this DJ. Well done enjoyed your take.
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LOL. Never thought of that but that is funny. Thanks again.
DJ
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I loved your take on this week’s opening line! Good story! Thank you for participating and stay tuned for next week’s challenge! Be well! ^..^
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I’m just a wild and crazy guy. See you next week.
DJ
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🙂
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