It was very cold as I sat cross-legged in the large town square. I was a true believer. I needed to draw their attention. Fire was the answer. The liquid felt cold as it was poured over me. Tommy threw the match.
Burning Me — Microstories #195
It was very cold as I sat cross-legged in the large town square. I was a true believer. I needed to draw their attention. Fire was the answer. The liquid felt cold as it was poured over me. Tommy threw the match.
Oh Danny Boy! 
You drew me into this piece and that square – and I didn’t like what I saw! What I read was powerful. Very well done.
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Thanks for the thoughtful comment.
DJ
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All I can say is “Wow!” in the best way possible!
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Thanks for that!
DJ
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Wow. I didn’t expect anyone to answer the question with “I am.” Self-immolation is a powerful statement to be sure.
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I agree. Glad you enjoyed. And good luck to you on #195.
DJ
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Chilling for such a burning story!
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Thanks. I appreciate the read.
DJ
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A powerful piece of writing in just 42 words. Well done.
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Thanks for the kind comment.
DJ
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Chilling!
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True! That it is. Was fun to write though.
DJ
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This is so damn good.. Very well written 🙂 …
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Love your comment 🙂 Thanks for stopping by.
DJ
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That used to happen more often than I’d like to remember. Very strong and powerful!
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I know what you mean.
DJ
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WOW, that is kind of a terrifying twist at the end.
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Some some reason the last line came naturally. Weird huh?
DJ
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Yikes! That last line is incredible. Well done & want more!
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Thanks and good luck to you.
DJ
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I love your take on this prompt. Also, I’m with Ruby- we want more!
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Stay tuned.
DJ
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Strong voice … I wish it had continued beyond 42 words
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I did have to cut some to get there, But then that only helps me focus.
DJ
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Danny’s mind…….! I had to read this twice. Part II: Arresting Tommy. Good one.
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It’s a confusing place to be in.
DJ
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