Written for Mondays Finish The Story. this is a flash fiction challenge where we are provided with a new photo each week, and the first sentence of a story. The challenge is to finish the story using 100-150 words, not including the sentence provided.
Finish the story begins with: “Silently as the people watched, the black hawk helicopter lifted into the air.”
My story begins after the photo. For other interpretations of the challenge just click on the blue frog at the end of this post.
Silently as the people watched, the black hawk helicopter lifted into the air.
“Mission accomplished Sir,” the voice came over the headset in commander Henderson’s helmet.
Henderson had been chosen for this mission based on his extensive background in these type of tight operations. Over twenty years in the field had prepared him for this dangerous job. He was the right man in the right time and it definitely was the right place.
He had been pitted against the largest army the enemy had to offer. The invasion force alone totaled over 10,000. All tactics up to that point had been a huge disappointment. Recon images showed the enemy had been hiding in underground caverns in the desert. But they were on the move now.
His black hawk held 16 Hellfire missiles. After firing only four of them the enemy was totally destroyed.
Smiling with satisfaction he turned to his co-pilot and remarked, “Toughest bunch of fire ants I’ve ever encountered.”
I love that last line~ Brilliant ~
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Thanks John! Always appreciate you stopping by and commenting.
DJ
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I did NOT see that coming! I like that you surprised me and turned a cliche military scene into comedy.
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Glad you enjoyed. Stop on by again.
DJ
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He certainly wasted no time swatting that rather disappointing enemy. Back in time for tea and biscuits!
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What? No crumpets?
DJ
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hahaha! Loved this! Send him over my way. I think the fire ants are renting out condos in my yard!!
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His prices are very reasonable.
DJ
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Those fire ants are tough indeed. Great take on the image DJ, enjoyed this one a lot.
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Ah.. those ants should not be joked with.. but hellfire missiles might be pushing it, especially if you want to have any houses left afterwards.
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Just a bit of overkill. 🙂
DJ
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Loved it! Thank you for participating! Stay tuned…. ^..^
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Roger that!
DJ
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