This post is written in response to Adam Ickes challenge Six on the Sixth using the theme word “Fire”.
Slowly the flames crept toward her.
The sight of smoke frighten her.
She could smell the burnt flooring.
Yellow coals were smoking behind her.
She heard the blare of sirens.
Helping hands suddenly appeared from above.
I like the way you’ve managed to tell a whole story through your little snippets. Sounds like there will be a happy ending!
As always thanks for the read and comment.
Ominous tiny tales that have a happy ending. I like how you relate each story to create a longer one. One note, I’m wondering about, “The sigh of smoke frighten her.” Should it be, “The sight of smoke frightened her,” or am I misunderstanding? Great work! 🙂
You are right of course. Don’t you just hate that when you read and reread a post and still find an error. It’s fixed.Thanks for the comment.
Well done. my personal favorite was “Flames.” So very ominous, and combined they tell a wonderful tale.