Six on the Sixth — April — Fire   6 comments

This post is written in response to Adam Ickes challenge Six on the Sixth using the theme word “Fire”.

Fire

Fire

Flames

Slowly the flames crept toward her.

Smoke

The sight of smoke frighten her.

Burnt

She could smell the burnt flooring.

Yellow Coals

Yellow coals were smoking behind her.

Sirens

She heard the blare of sirens.

Hands 

Helping hands suddenly appeared from above.

 

Posted April 6, 2014 by Danny James in Six on the Sixth

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  1. I like the way you’ve managed to tell a whole story through your little snippets. Sounds like there will be a happy ending!

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  2. Ominous tiny tales that have a happy ending. I like how you relate each story to create a longer one. One note, I’m wondering about, “The sigh of smoke frighten her.” Should it be, “The sight of smoke frightened her,” or am I misunderstanding? Great work! 🙂

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  3. Well done. my personal favorite was “Flames.” So very ominous, and combined they tell a wonderful tale.

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