He’s Behind You — Episode 4

Kerrie Ann Salsac’s Chain Writing Game continues in week 5. You can see all the rules there too.

With a sudden jolt the elevator came back to life and continued its downward decent.

Ben, realizing this might be his last chance to make an impression on Kelly, moved closer and started to caress her face. As they embraced they could hear the dings that indicated they were moving slowly towards the lobby.

Finally the elevator came to a sudden stop and they realized they were at the lobby level. One last passionate kiss and the door opened.

The lobby was empty. Except for one sinister looking creature coming towards them.


11 thoughts on “He’s Behind You — Episode 4

  1. silentlyheardonce January 26, 2014 / 4:18 pm

    Ben wasted no time. Kelly is a bit of a floozy kissing Ben so quickly. I guess she started it asking him to hold her.


  2. J. Milburn January 26, 2014 / 12:11 pm

    *sigh* It always seems like some ‘sinister creature’ comes along to ruin a moment. Usually, for me, it’s the kids 😉


  3. draliman January 26, 2014 / 1:14 am

    Ah ha, and here comes the trouble I’ve been expecting!
    Ben should have known better than to sign up as a character in the Chain Writing Game 🙂


    • Danny James January 26, 2014 / 8:57 am

      I can’t wait to see what will happen to him.



    • kerrieanns January 26, 2014 / 6:24 pm

      Haha! I love how our characters seem doomed. We seem to take murder your darlings to a whole new level 😛


      • Danny James January 26, 2014 / 8:11 pm

        They certainly entertain us with a lot of action.



  4. EagleAye January 25, 2014 / 11:24 pm

    Oh man! Why did the elevator have to start up? Ben was getting somewhere. Oh well, at least they had an intimate moment. There’s definitely opportunity for him now. Unfortunately, I have a feeling they’ll be running for their lives very soon.


    • Danny James January 25, 2014 / 11:43 pm

      I left that door open but things should start heating up soon.


      • EagleAye January 26, 2014 / 12:26 am

        Oh yeah, especially with ‘something’ there as the door opens.


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