Carpe Diem #364 — Yaroslavsky Terminal Moscow

Credits: Yaroslavsky Terminal Moscow

Well … off we go on our first part of our journey straight through the Soviet Union with the TSR up to Vladivostok and finally we will arrive at Shikoku Island.  I combined a Haiku pared with an American Sentence. Special thanks to Bjorn.

Written for Carpe Diem.

Clouds out my window

violin strings are in the air

a leaving behind

Reflecting on the pleasure of the  journey that will be my future.

Table chair bowl of fruit

train whistles mark my journey

a new life begins

9 thoughts on “Carpe Diem #364 — Yaroslavsky Terminal Moscow

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) January 2, 2014 / 1:43 pm

    Ha… your comments are very much appreciated… I learned about american sentences a while ago.. to me I think they lend themselves to capture a level of grittiness that went goes well with cities and trainstation…

    Ginsburg was after all well aware of Haiku poetry and he was a Buddhist.. but the sentenses works in some instanses where haiku don’t. To put in som level of juxtaposition and think of them as haiku helps.

    Actually some of the one-line haiku’s by Lolly and Wabi are similar to American Sentenses in a way..

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    • Danny James January 2, 2014 / 1:48 pm

      I’m learning! Thanks for the read and thoughtful comment.

      DJ

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  2. magicalmysticalteacher January 2, 2014 / 8:53 am

    Is the journey the future or the now? 😉

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    • Danny James January 2, 2014 / 10:12 am

      Not to be evasive; but both.

      Thanks for the read.

      DJ

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  3. Chèvrefeuille January 1, 2014 / 11:55 pm

    This is a great response on our prompt for today Danny … I like this combining two kinds of poetry a lot. Of course I am more of the haiku, but the American Sentence sounds great too. However I hadn’t heard earlier of American Sentences. Read that for the first time in Bjorn’s post for today’s Carpe Diem prompt.
    Thank you for sharing and being a participant in Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.

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    • Danny James January 2, 2014 / 10:14 am

      My pleasure!

      Thanks for the read. I also read Bjorn’s post and it gave me the idea to try that format.

      DJ

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  4. Anja January 1, 2014 / 10:46 pm

    Bjorn is amazing. 🙂 This was lovely…especially violin strings in the air.

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    • Danny James January 1, 2014 / 11:00 pm

      Thanks Anja! Sometimes I understand Bjorn and then……sometimes not. But he is excellent.

      DJ

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      • Anja January 1, 2014 / 11:01 pm

        hahaha He is one of my favorites 🙂

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