Five Sentence Fiction: Erased   7 comments

What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week Lillie McFerrin will post a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word.

The word does not have to appear in your five sentences, just use it for direction.

This week: ERASED


I sometimes dream of this man who has no face; however I have a feeling I know him.

He mocks me with an invisible silent grin.

I try to reach out to him but he only extends a phantom limb.

I dream that whatever our relationship is, it must be pretty grim.

“Yes, he cries; but that’s just the prelim.”

Posted November 1, 2013 by Danny James in 5 Sentence Fiction, NaBloPoMo

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7 responses to “Five Sentence Fiction: Erased

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  4. Fascinating take on the prompt. I really enjoyed reading this!!!


  5. I really enjoy your writing style and how you build and expand on the prompts.


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