This post is in the response to Friday Fictioneers.

My dad spent his entire working life for that company. I remember him getting up at 4:30 in the morning, fixing his own pot of coffee and smoking that first cigarette.
He spent between eight and ten hours a day at his rolling machine with a 17 minute break before lunch and a thirteen minute break in the afternoon. For the life of me I could never figure out how they arrived at those exact break periods.
The cancer killed him before he could retire. All his dreams up in smoke.
The company closed the plant four years ago.
Maddeningly ironic, painfully tragic.
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This sounds like an uncle of mine who worked in a rubber shop his whole adult life and died in his 60’s of cancer. Very sad. Well written, Danny. — Suzanne
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Thanks for commenting Suzanne.
DJ
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Sad.
Even if fiction, it is true.
too many lost in smoke – or working in/with cancer producing agents.
Randy
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True! And so many people just will not learn that cancer kills.
DJ
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Good title, adds to the story.
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Dear Danny,
A wasted life summed up in a hundred words. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks for the nice words!
DJ
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Lost too many to lung cancer. IT is sad how many work themselves so hard only to die at, just before or just after retirement.
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Very sad. Damn cigarettes. Killed my father, too.
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Poor chap, after working his fingers to the bone. Up in (cigarette) smoke indeed.
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Is this true? Very sad and believable.
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Total fiction. Thanks for stopping by.
DJ
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This is dark.. so existential, where is the purpose except placing the next generation on earth?
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Depressing isn’t it!
DJ
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Actually I thought of Camus when I read this… 🙂
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up in smoke….got that right! been missing you, DJ! Good to see you back.
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What a nice thing to say! It’s great to be back.
DJ
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