Running Away   21 comments

This post is written for Friday Fictioneers. My story follows the picture prompt.


PHOTO PROMPT -© Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

I can’t believe I could get everything I posses in a little four by six foot moving trailer. Thirty five years old and in this little truck are all my worldly possessions.

Looking out my hotel window on this cold and raining night just confirms my desire to leave this depressing mid west town. I  told her it was the best solution for our problems. Starting the affair was my fault. I never wanted to be a home wrecker. I couldn’t stay in the same town with her.

Another two days on the road and I  will be in Tucson.

21 responses to “Running Away

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  1. This is one of the thoughts I got from the image as well.. I went on another direction though.

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  2. …and people ask me why I’m single! A sad but all too common situation.
    Rosey Pinkerton’s blog

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  3. If he’s going to carry on like that it’s probably best that he can easily pack up and leave!

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  4. another scoundrel hits the road!

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  5. Sometimes we make choices without thinking of the consequences… good idea to move on!

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  6. Miserable night, miserable tale.
    Well done.

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  7. Leaving the scene of his crime I would say.

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  8. “48 hours from Tucson”: was that Gene Pitney? 😉
    Good piece.

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  9. Very fitting take on the prompt.

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  10. Dear Danny,

    He’s doing the right thing. It makes me think of By the Time I Get to Phoenix. Well done.



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  11. This is such a depressing piece! In a very good way. Parking lots on rainy nights cry out for depressing.


  12. The story fits the picture well.

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