First Love

This post is written in response to Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers.   wpid-photo-20150604190751019

First Love

“Why did he let us go all at once. It would seem to be more effective to drag the process out don’t you think? I mean he has practiced this before without her. Or am I being premature in my judgement.” “Well she also had a hand in this decision  you know,” said Richard. “But I mean consider all the odds of being the successful one. About one in 20 million I’ve read. I mean swim, swim, swim and even if you get there first it doesn’t mean that you will be the “lucky” one.” “Well Harry, you know what they say. First love is only a little foolishness and a lot of curiosity.”

8 thoughts on “First Love

  1. tjparis June 15, 2015 / 11:26 pm

    I love the composition of this. A really light touch. 🙂

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  2. Priceless Joy June 13, 2015 / 9:30 pm

    Oh, I forgot. Welcome to Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers challenge! Hope you have fun.

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  3. Priceless Joy June 13, 2015 / 9:28 pm

    Oh my gosh! This is so funny! What an imagination! Love it.

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