This post is written in response to Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers.
First Love
“Why did he let us go all at once. It would seem to be more effective to drag the process out don’t you think? I mean he has practiced this before without her. Or am I being premature in my judgement.” “Well she also had a hand in this decision you know,” said Richard. “But I mean consider all the odds of being the successful one. About one in 20 million I’ve read. I mean swim, swim, swim and even if you get there first it doesn’t mean that you will be the “lucky” one.” “Well Harry, you know what they say. First love is only a little foolishness and a lot of curiosity.”
[…] First Love […]
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I love the composition of this. A really light touch. 🙂
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Thanks so much for the kind words.
DJ
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what a fantastic take on the prompt – loved it!
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Oh, I forgot. Welcome to Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers challenge! Hope you have fun.
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Oh my gosh! This is so funny! What an imagination! Love it.
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My pleasure and thanks for the challenge.
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Thanks! And that’s my pleasure. 🙂 Thanks for joining the challenge.
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