Five Sentence Fiction — Jack

 

Lillie McFerrin Writes

Clutch

American Sentence

I was lonely, a nerd, a recluse, never fitting in, pimple faced little runt and needing someone, really anyone to understand me.

We were friends from high school, where we were first introduced.

He was a good friend that would always cut you some slack.

Being with him was like being seduced.

In conclusion please let me introduce you to my very good friend Jack.

jack

10 thoughts on “Five Sentence Fiction — Jack

  1. fibee5 January 22, 2014 / 7:27 am

    I liked the twist at the end 🙂

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  2. Lisa Shambrook January 21, 2014 / 7:45 am

    Great use of the prompt, and pretty sure I can see him clutching Jack!

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    • Danny James January 21, 2014 / 7:52 am

      Thanks for the read. Appreciate your comment!

      DJ

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  3. K. R. Smith January 20, 2014 / 9:37 am

    Excellent! I have a good buddy named Morgan that hang with on a regular basis. He’s a Captain, I believe…

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  4. silentlyheardonce January 18, 2014 / 7:03 am

    I once had a good friend like that Mr. Boston. A good tale I didn’t know the until the end.

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