Chain Writing Game: Episode 25

This is my final shot. See Kerrie Salsac’s Chain Writing Game.  What ever will happen to poor Cindy. It’s out of my control girl.

Mac, almost unconscious, saw Agent Kent leaving with Cindy when suddenly Kent slammed backward from the force of the bullet that entered his chest. A female figure loomed over him and kicked him in the groin for good measure.

“Aadila,” Mac mouthed!

Aadila whipped out her cell phone and when the call was answered she said, “We have the Princess, what are your orders now, Signor Giuliani?”

“Va bene, Signor,” I will call him now.

Suddenly Mac’s cell phone began to vibrate.

20 thoughts on “Chain Writing Game: Episode 25

  1. draliman January 1, 2014 / 12:35 am

    Great twist, I didn’t see that coming.
    I was also starting to think that Aadila had been left behind in the bush at the house!

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    • Danny James January 1, 2014 / 8:50 am

      I thought she should come back into the picture somehow. I was wondering what happened to her so I brought her back. Thanks for the comment.

      DJ

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  2. EagleAye December 30, 2013 / 5:22 pm

    I was wondering if Aadila had been forgotten. How cool that she’s more than she seemed to be. Polylingual for one. My fingers are itching to add in something but I’ve used up my three. Looking forward to see where this goes.

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    • Danny James December 30, 2013 / 5:30 pm

      I wish I had a few more shots myself. I’m amazed how things are going for Cindy.

      DJ

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  3. Joe Owens December 30, 2013 / 4:03 pm

    Yay, I have two shots left. I have already posted three times today, so likely will queue my next up to post on tomorrow’s calendar date.

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    • Danny James December 30, 2013 / 4:13 pm

      I thought we had 3 total posts for the entire story?

      DJ

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      • Joe Owens December 30, 2013 / 4:18 pm

        Sorry, I mean I posted three times on my blog for other entries. You are right about three total pieces of the Chain Writing Game.

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  4. kerrieanns December 30, 2013 / 3:04 pm

    Aadila! I did not see that coming!
    But who is ringing Mac?
    Love this entry! 😀

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    • Danny James December 30, 2013 / 4:15 pm

      Thanks for the comment. Hope he picks up 😎

      DJ

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  5. J. Milburn December 30, 2013 / 11:50 am

    Oh! Is anyone who the seem to be? Are the rescued teen girls secretly ninja bodyguards? Love the twist!

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    • Danny James December 30, 2013 / 2:00 pm

      Thanks J! That was my final shot. My gun is empty. Whatever will happen now?

      DJ

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    • Danny James December 30, 2013 / 2:01 pm

      Agree. Hope someone can come to the rescue.

      DJ

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  6. Al December 30, 2013 / 10:22 am

    That was a twist I didn’t see. Fantastic

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    • Danny James December 30, 2013 / 2:03 pm

      Thanks Al!

      Now we are both on the side lines to see what happens to our little friend.

      DJ

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      • Al December 30, 2013 / 3:04 pm

        Yep. I am looking forward to see how it pans out. Hopefully with more people getting involved

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