Three Sisters   10 comments


“I think he likes you Abia, a sister knows.”

“Quiet Nasra, you will spoil this transaction for your older sister.  Please tell me you will take care of our little sister Heela. Please!”

These 33 words form my entry into the Trifextra 95 challenge. We were asked to write a story containing a particular word three times. My chosen word was sister.

Posted November 22, 2013 by Danny James in Trifecta Challenge

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10 responses to “Three Sisters

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  1. Great little story. There’s a kind of formality to it that I really liked.


  2. Excellent.


  3. Nice work 🙂 enjoyed reading this 🙂


  4. Wow, this works so well with that picture. Delightful read. Thanks for linking up!


  5. I like the scene you depicted. The conversation flowed well.


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