“I think he likes you Abia, a sister knows.”
“Quiet Nasra, you will spoil this transaction for your older sister. Please tell me you will take care of our little sister Heela. Please!”
These 33 words form my entry into the Trifextra 95 challenge. We were asked to write a story containing a particular word three times. My chosen word was sister.
Oh Danny Boy! 
Great little story. There’s a kind of formality to it that I really liked.
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Thanks I appreciate that!
DJ
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Excellent.
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Why thank you!
DJ
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Nice work 🙂 enjoyed reading this 🙂
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Thanks! That makes me feel good!
DJ
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Wow, this works so well with that picture. Delightful read. Thanks for linking up!
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My pleasure. Glad you enjoyed!
DJ
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I like the scene you depicted. The conversation flowed well.
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Thanks. You eased one of my doubts about the flow of the conversation. As you know it’s hard to work the same three words in a story of thirty three words.
DJ
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