Pieces   2 comments

Lillie McFerrin hosts the weekly Five Sentence Fiction Challenge. The challenge this week is the word “Pieces”.

What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week she will post a one word inspiration, than anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word.


The picture shows a beaming couple being married under a Gazebo with the Pacific Ocean in the background.

The groom looks at his bride and sees a beauty that absolutely radiates from within her.

She looks at her groom and thinks how lucky they are and how wonderful the future will be for them together.



NaBloPoMo #22

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  1. Bingo! You are very good! Two in a row!



  2. It seems you’re still on the theme of war in what you’ve written, What you’ve written here is a vivid portrayal of couples getting married days or hours before he has to leave to go fight in a war; without either of them knowing whether or not they’ll see each other again.

    Have I read between the lines again??? A curious mind wants to know !!! 🙂 🙂 🙂


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