Evening walk

This post is written for Friday Fictioneers. The challenge is to write a complete story, beginning, middle and end in 100 words of less. My story follows the picture prompt below.

PHOTO PROMPT © Sandra Crook

They enjoyed their late evening walks along the beach especially at sunset. It was their favorite time together. They always looked up and were amazed at the beauty of the birds as they used the cliff to draft their effortless flight in the waning light. Tonight he walked alone after their nasty argument. Suddenly he realized these were not the regular birds. They were vultures. And then he spotted the body.

9 thoughts on “Evening walk

  1. Bill November 29, 2022 / 1:36 pm

    A difficult end. Well done, Danny.

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  2. msjadeli November 27, 2022 / 12:55 pm

    Every bit of it easy to visualize. When confronted with death like that, petty squabbles seem insignificant. I bet, after calling 911 and making a statement, he rushed home to hug his loved one.

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