April 28, 2017 Danny James Life is Short This post submitted to 3 Line Tales. photo by Clay Knight via Unsplash Cool babbling brooks here Life lived without a concern Death lurks near unseen Rate this:Share this:EmailPrintTweetMoreLike this:Like Loading... Related
“Death lurks unseen,” though a nice turn of a phrase, makes it sound like the Big Bad Wolf. I would suggest “Death permeates life here.” LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Oh Danny Boy! 
“Death lurks unseen,” though a nice turn of a phrase, makes it sound like the Big Bad Wolf. I would suggest “Death permeates life here.”
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One syllable too many (6). Haikus are 5-7-5.
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