Just Let Me Get My Shoes

This post submitted for Friday Fictioneers.

Photo Prompt@Magaly Guerrero

“I’m told my wife is here. ” She has wandered off again. I wonder what she has told these people since she appeared out of nowhere.  Why did she take it upon herself to return my customer’s shoes? I never promised any home delivery. The doctor’s say she’s not quite right in the head. She must be expecting me since she called. Like she’s a freaking member of the family. Probably “putting on air’s” as my father used to say.

“Take a seat. She will be here in a minute.”

I hear footsteps, It must be her.


15 thoughts on “Just Let Me Get My Shoes

  1. Michael Wynn April 23, 2017 / 3:23 am

    She has a problem and he is struggling with it. You depicted his lack of sympathy very well

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  2. Life Lessons of a Dog Lover April 20, 2017 / 6:10 pm

    Good story depicting a husband struggling to understand what is happening to his wife.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. gahlearner April 19, 2017 / 5:27 pm

    He doesn’t sound like a loving husband.

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  4. Magaly Guerrero April 19, 2017 / 3:54 pm

    The narrator’s tone sounds so harshly. Makes me wonder what made him, his wife, their lives…

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