Charlie Corporate   23 comments

This is my first post for the first Haibun Thinking – a new Haibun Writing Challenge. The prompt I chose was:

“Life moves pretty fast. If you don’t stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.”
– Ferris Bueller’s Day Off

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His rise through the ladders of work left him breathless.

Time out for marriage that was for sure.

There were kids his wife assured.

No one mentioned this unfairness.

***

One more time he had to check this corporate allure.

Corporate Gods before all.

Up, up towards that impossible goal for sure.

With all this some say he had a lot of gall.

***

Once there, everything had been left behind.

But no one was there to see him now.

He thought he was a gift to mankind.

But in the end he wasn’t even the cats meow.

a rose for my love

i wish i could play again

one more chance to smell

Posted January 21, 2014 by Danny James in Haibun, Haiku, Poetry, postaday

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23 responses to “Charlie Corporate

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  1. Career or family?
    A choice so many of us face.
    Great response to the prompt!

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  2. Probably too true of a message in today’s world. The corporate go getter needs to know how to balance family life into the mix. Or – in the end -may be left all alone.

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  3. AnElephant loves this approach.
    Quite excellent piece of writing, original and refreshing.
    And sad, but so often too true.

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  4. Be careful how you are to folk on the way up…you might meet em again on the way down …Great piece.

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  5. My friend always says, be nice to your kids, they pick out your nursing home. Not that I need that reminder usually, but it does make me laugh. Sounds like the man in your excellent poem might have needed to hear this.

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  6. I know several men who fit that role. Thankfully my own hubby is not one of them…

    I played here:
    http://julesinflashyfiction.wordpress.com/2014/01/21/haibun-january-plays-whisper-down-the-lane/

    ~Jules(Paige)

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  7. This is so moving….wonderful haibun and the haiku really does say a lot.

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  8. I like how you told this. It’s really well done. Thank you for taking part Danny

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  9. Excellent Haibun and Haiku Danny well done. You have conveyed an excellent message through both pieces.

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