Friday Fictioneers time! This week’s photo comes courtesy of Adam Ickes. Every week Rochelle posts a picture and nearly 100 writers put their own spin on it. Head over, read some great writers, and join in the fun.
Write a one hundred word story that has a beginning, middle and end. (No one will be ostracized for going a few words over the count.)
you said let’s go someplace quite
a place together; just us
somewhere you could be my knight
you knew i wouldn’t make a fuss
the lake was warm you said
we shed our cloths to bear our souls
somehow this filled me with dread
i suddenly needed to escape this water hole
my fear was real after you revealed
terrible things i didn’t want to here
certain things you wanted i couldn’t yield
you graced me with your rotten sneer
that led to an angry walk
looking back I said
don’t forget your boots are on the dock
Leave before you get in any deeper – nice one for my own first week on FF Danny.
Thanks! Your post was very good.
Good choice to get out, Danny.
Better now than later! Thanks for commenting.
“You’ve got to know when to fold!”
Thank you Kenny.
Oh sounds like a good escape…
I think there might be “hings i didn’t want to hear” … cheers
Thanks for the comment. Cheers to you also!
Sounds like a good relationship to walk away from. Good one.
Indeed. I think it will be final.
Oh I like this!
Why thank you for the nice comment!