Friday Fictioneers

Friday Fictioneers time! This week’s photo comes courtesy of Adam Ickes. Every week Rochelle posts a picture and nearly 100 writers put their own spin on it. Head over, read some great writers, and join in the fun.

THE CHALLENGE:

Write a one hundred word story that has a beginning, middle and end. (No one will be ostracized for going a few words over the count.)

Copyright - Adam Ickes

you said let’s go someplace quite

a place together; just us

somewhere you could be my knight

you knew i wouldn’t make a fuss

the lake was warm you said

we shed our cloths to bear our souls

somehow this filled me with dread

i suddenly needed to escape this water hole

my fear was real after you revealed

terrible things i didn’t want to here

certain things you wanted i couldn’t yield

you graced me with your rotten sneer

that led to an angry walk

looking back I said

don’t forget your boots are on the dock

12 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers

  1. liz young December 15, 2013 / 5:13 pm

    Leave before you get in any deeper – nice one for my own first week on FF Danny.

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    • Danny James December 14, 2013 / 11:10 pm

      Better now than later! Thanks for commenting.

      DJ

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  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) December 14, 2013 / 10:40 am

    Oh sounds like a good escape…

    I think there might be “hings i didn’t want to hear” … cheers

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    • Danny James December 14, 2013 / 11:00 am

      Thanks for the comment. Cheers to you also!

      DJ

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  3. rochellewisoff December 14, 2013 / 7:48 am

    Dear Danny,

    Sounds like a good relationship to walk away from. Good one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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