Sneaky Killer

Trifextra week ninety-one

Trifextra challenge is to write 33 words on a beast in an unusual place. No swamps or forests or caves, we really want you to take your beast out of its comfort zone.

Arising from the lining of my stomach

Metastasizing over many years

Leaving me weak and unable to fight

Someone always has it worse

Although this thing called Cancer is a curse!

16 thoughts on “Sneaky Killer

  1. Ivy (Mommy Dourest) October 28, 2013 / 9:26 am

    Oh, a most horrible beast that doesn’t discriminate. I think everyone knows someone who’s encountered this monster. Great, clever use of the prompt!

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    • Danny James October 28, 2013 / 9:35 am

      Thanks for your comment. And yes, I think most of us know of someone who is affected. I know I do. Stop on by again.

      DJ

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  2. atrm61 October 28, 2013 / 2:18 am

    A beast all of us fear specially cos it cannot be defeated-most of the times!Well put DJ!:-)

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    • Danny James October 27, 2013 / 4:39 pm

      Yes, on many levels. Thanks for the comment!

      DJ

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  3. trifectawriting October 27, 2013 / 12:39 pm

    Another beast that turns up in all the most unexpected and unwanted places. Great write. Thanks for linking up!

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  4. deanabo October 26, 2013 / 6:33 pm

    I agree. Cancer is the worst beast of all.

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  5. scottishmomus October 26, 2013 / 7:55 am

    So briefly put but hit right home. I did not see it coming after reading what the challenge was. A very good take on it.x

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    • Danny James October 26, 2013 / 8:08 am

      Thanks for your thoughtful comment. I appreciate it. Look forward to reading more of your posts.

      DJ

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    • Danny James October 26, 2013 / 7:50 am

      Agree. Thanks for taking the time to comment. Hope to see you again.

      DJ

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