Written for Friday Fictioneers.
I can see the sky clearly through the branches of the tree. How long I have been down here remains a mystery to me. I can feel the handcuffs on my wrists and the chains that bind my feet. I have a dark idea that this is supposed to be my grave. There appears to be patches of dirt covering my body. I hear voices speaking softly above me. I suddenly feel something that hits my chest. It’s more dirt! Shadows drift slowly above me, one from each side. I start to scream as more dirt fills my mouth.
That was pretty horrible – and well-written!
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What a terrifying time to wake up! You painted a very vivid picture here!
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Thanks for your nice comment.
DJ
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Danny, I agree that it would be the most terrifying thing that could happen to a person. Having a dream like that is truly a night terror. I’ve had a couple and they scared the daylights out of me. It’s no wonder some people want to be buried with their cell phones. Well written. 🙂 —Susan
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Thanks Susan. There was a time during thr great plague when they buried the dead with a bell hanging outside their coffin in case they were buried alive. Hence the name “bell ringer.”
Dj
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Yikes! Scary. Great imagery. Well done!
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Thanks so much for your comment.
DJ
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Horror! That’s no place to be. Well written.
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Thanks! Appreciate your comment.
DJ
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Definitely the worst day ever. Horrible.
janet
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And most likely his last! Thanks Janet.
DJ
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Oh my, what a story.
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Thank you!!
DJ
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Shudder.
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🙂
DJ
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Possibly the worst way to go. I guess he annoyed the “wrong people”.
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Really nasty people it would seem.
DJ
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Oh gawd! This is just too damned scary just before bed! It’s good, though 😛
Ellespeth
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I like your reply. Sweet dreams.
DJ
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I always thought fire would be a horrible way to go but I think you have found it and described it to a tee.
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Thanks. Your comment means a lot to me since I enjoy your stories also.
DJ
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What a generous reply, thank you.
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I cannot imagine anything worse than to wake up and being in a grave with someone throwing dirt on me. E-gads – this is a true nightmare and nicely done. Nan 🙂
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Thanks Nan.
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To be buried alive.. The worst nightmare ever..
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Appreciate your rhoughts and ai agree.
DJ
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That’s a frightening story, Danny, and an imaginative take on the prompt.
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Thanks Karen. I enjoy your writings also.
DJ
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