CARPE DIEM “Little Ones”   6 comments

In this weeks Carpe Diem Haiku Kai Special challenge “Little Ones” we are asked to create an American Sentence. Created by Allen Ginsberg to make an “American” form of haiku, the sentence follows the same syllable count as a traditional haiku: 17. Written left to right vs vertically.

Inquisitive face, wagging tail, pleading their case, wishing beyond hope.

Posted January 20, 2014 by Danny James in Carp Diem, Poetry

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6 responses to “CARPE DIEM “Little Ones””

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  1. Nicely done and that photo is tear breaking … what a nicely written American Sentence Danny.

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    Chèvrefeuille
    January 21, 2014 at 8:37 am

  2. Perfect sentence describing these little guys

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    silentlyheardonce
    January 20, 2014 at 8:40 pm

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