CARPE DIEM “Little Ones”

In this weeks Carpe Diem Haiku Kai Special challenge “Little Ones” we are asked to create an American Sentence. Created by Allen Ginsberg to make an “American” form of haiku, the sentence follows the same syllable count as a traditional haiku: 17. Written left to right vs vertically.

Inquisitive face, wagging tail, pleading their case, wishing beyond hope.

Author: Danny James

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6 thoughts on “CARPE DIEM “Little Ones””

Chèvrefeuille says:

January 21, 2014 at 8:37 am

Nicely done and that photo is tear breaking … what a nicely written American Sentence Danny.

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1. Danny James says:
  
  January 21, 2014 at 12:38 pm
  
  As always I appreciate your comment!
  
  DJ
  
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  1. Chèvrefeuille says:
    
    January 22, 2014 at 7:25 pm
    
    My pleasure
    
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silentlyheardonce says:

January 20, 2014 at 8:40 pm

Perfect sentence describing these little guys

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1. Danny James says:
  
  January 20, 2014 at 9:37 pm
  
  Thanks! I’m an old softie for dogs and cats (Elvis, Purrcee, and Wilson)
  
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  1. silentlyheardonce says:
    
    January 20, 2014 at 9:40 pm
    
    🙂
    
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